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Perfect lab purpose paragraph

Submitted by michaelkim on Sun, 04/08/2018 - 15:38

Purpose of this lab is to dehydrate cyclohexanol and synthesizing cyclohexene by taking all that we’ve done so far. These processes include taking the melting points, boiling points, molecular weight densities, and figuring out what the hazardous properties are. By separating and purifying the substance using combination of extraction, distillation, crystallization, chromatography, and more the lab is complete. There are many processes that we learned so far in the lab shown right above, and honestly it was all pretty simple. There are step by step display on what we have to do on the organic chemistry 269 website. Lab reports are fairly simple as well, it just takes some time to complete them. My favorite one is crystallization because different crystals are formed whether it be different color, different weight, and more factors.

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In two of your sentences you use the nouns combination and different, these nouns need a determining phrase before them like "the combination of" or "a different color" doing this will help make your sentences clearer and more correct. Other than that it was a great paragraph.

"By separating and purifying the substance using combination of extraction, distillation, crystallization, chromatography, and more the lab is complete." 

"My favorite one is crystallization because different crystals are formed whether it be different color, different weight, and more factors."

Instead of: "Purpose of this lab is to dehydrate cyclohexanol and synthesizing cyclohexene ...", you should write "The purpose of this lab is to dehydrate cyclohexanol and synthesize cyclohexene ..."