In 2004 there was a high demand for humanities in foreign relations when an issue was made calling for National Foreign Language Capabilities. The reason they released this issue was becasue they wanted people who studied how other cultures work and understanding their ways of thinking. Acknowledging humanities as a key aspect in the government helps us understand our nation and the value we hold and support. Another reason humanities holds a key value in our society is in awareness of surroundings during meetings, conferences, and group projects. I feel a key characteristic to hold is understanding others which is a key idea in humanities since during meetings, conferences, or group projects we must respect others even if we don’t agree with their ideas. Circling around to the idea of being open-minded.
This is a strong PP and you lay out the facts as well as your own personal ideas on humanities in a fluid motion
being specific as to what you mean by "humanities" would really help the readers understanding
Who is 'they'? Try not to use
Who is 'they'? Try not to use it so often.