One reason why scientists should choose to vaccinate a German Shepherd female is that German Shepherds are among the most intellgient dog breeds. Growing up, I witnessed this display of intelligence. Both of my German Shepherds learned how to open doors with their paws without being trained to do so. My current dog picks up his food bowl when he is hungry and nudges the water bowl when it’s empty. They both only required a couple weeks of training, whereas my other dogs, Labradors, required twice as much time. They not only make smart family pets, but are also fundamental components of the military, police stations, and disability services. As said from My Assistance Dog Inc, “They’re also incredibly sharp, observant, courageous, trainable, and loyal, which makes them the leading choice for working dogs used by the military, police, TSA, border patrol, and other law enforcement agencies”. This website also discusses how they also have long history as guide dogs and assistant dogs to people with disabilities due to their trainibility. All of these institutions require serious concentration and reliability and thus these dogs are essential assets to humanity.
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The second sentence is more of a phrase, I would add more detail. Otherwise very good paragraph.
I would connect some of these
I would connect some of these sentences, it sounds a little choppy
In thes sentence "My current
In thes sentence "My current dog picks up his food bowl when he is hungry and nudges the water bowl when it’s empty" you do not make it clear that your current dog is German Shepard, which is helpful for your argument.