Throughout the course of our existence the human race has been thought to be responsible for a staggering level of extinction events. However, through the means given to us by modern medicine, we now have the ability to save one individual breed of man’s best friend, the canis lineage, from a rapidly spreading retrovirus. Before a decision is made I believe that an intrinsic worth or value should be assigned to each breed that is determined by their practical use and popularity. From this value, we can then identify the most prefered breeds and then make a decision based on this value from a nation-wide voting system that is similar to the system used in presidential elections. After personally weighing the importance of the breed to mankind and their popularity I believe that the German Shepherd should be vaccinated against the retrovirus.
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Very well-structured in my
Very well-structured in my opinion, just some minor spelling errors
canis lineage
the canis "lineage" includes non-domestic animals as well such as wolves and coyotes. Here we are interested in domestic dog "lineage".
The first sentence seems
The first sentence seems rather odd. I would suggest rewording it and condensing it.