In the article “Experimental evidence for a mismatch between insect emergence and waterfowl hatching under increased spring temperatures,” it states that insect emergence is mainly driven by temperature. This article shows that even changing a few degrees of temperature will affect whether insects will thrive or not. This information can be used to take into consideration the variation in temperature within both Morrill buildings and within the different floors.
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maybe the first sentence
maybe the first sentence should begin with The article, " " states that.
last sentence wording
I feel like the last sentence would flow better if it read "within both Morrill buildings and the different floors."
When you are citing an
When you are citing an aritcle, sometimes you can just say which author said it and then include the name of the article in your references.