The human body has two lungs located in their chest. The right lung is bigger than the left lung. The right lung has three lobes while the left lung has two lobes. The lobes of the right lung are the upper, middle, and lower. The lobes of the left lung are upper and lower. Each lobe of the lung has segments. The upper lobe of the right lung has segments called the apical, anterior, and posterior. The middle lobe of the right lung has segments called medial and lateral. The lower lobe of the right lung has segments called superior, anterior, posterior, medial, and lateral. The upper lobe of the left lung has segments called anterior and apicoposterior. The lower lobe of the left lung has segments called superior, anterior, posterior, medial, and lateral.
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The structure of your
The structure of your sentences seem very broken and abrupt, I feel you have the opportunity here to make your sentences flow together more smoothly, especially when you discuss the features of each strucuture of the lungs. There is a lot of description which will allow your sentences to be more fluid. Try incorporating more commas, semicolons and transitional words.
choppy
This paragraph is very choppy. Each sentence states a fact, but it does not seem to flow from one sentence to another. Almost as if you are just stating the facts with no other objective. make it flow, organize the facts.
In the first sentence, you do
In the first sentence, you do not need the "located in their chest" bit. Overall the sentences do not flow or connect ot eachother.