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Submitted by benjaminburk on Sun, 02/18/2018 - 13:04

he organism I decided to picture was found in the Durfee Conservatory, which is located between University Health Services and Morrill II. The exact address is 210 Stockbridge Road and it is open to the public 10am to 4pm, Monday through Friday. I went to conservatory at approximately 11am on a Friday. The entrance I used was the one closest to Morrill II, with a wooden sign outside of it that reads "Durfee Conservatory Visitors Welcome". Once inside the organism was found directly to the left of the entrance in a square pot. The name of the plant is Camellia Japonica Jarvis Red, it had a structure that was very similar to a small tree with green leaves and a few blossoming pink flowers. Once I found the plant and identified the name I returned to the door and placed my left hip on the shelves grounded to the wall and took a picture at eye level or approximately five and a half feet off the ground. Using my Iphone camera, I was sure to capture the full pant while specifically focusing on capturing the two blooming flowers in the picture as well. Then I squared my shoulders to the side of the plant facing Morrill II, so now my back was to the entrance wall. I then located the lower of the two flowers on this face of the plant, cleared away the branches in order to see the flower head on and took the second picture, once again using my Iphone camera. I was sure that the flower took up the majority of the screen and that individual structures of the flowers were identifiable. Once all the pictures were gathered the figure was created and it soncsisted of three panels, labeled A, B and C respectively.

 

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You mention taking two pictures in the paragraph, but then say you included three panels without explaining what the third panel was a picture of.

When using a product name like Apples iPhone you should be spelling the product the same way that the company does. So you should correct Iphone to iPhone.