- avoid passive voice “it was concluded” “this was demonstrated” “the fungus was discovered”
- avoid judgements (good, bad, important, smart, sensible, correct, right, etc), use assertions (past tense unless in proposals, present if universal truths)
- avoid vague modifiers “while both the original and replicated figure came out to be about the same, there are a few key differences”, many, few, extreme, basic, simple
- if you need to make estimates use universal comparisons
- avoid personification, “it was taken from above the fungus, looking down onto its face” “the larvae tried to climb out” etc
- avoid conversational speech “just after ___ I found a group of trees that seemed like possible cadiddates for fungus” , thankfully, “it was a beautiful day”, you, idioms, slang “to start off” use “to begin” instead, “have to”
- avoid metaphoric. figurative lang, humor, anaglogies, luck, feelings, exaggeration
- avoid sensationalism/hyperbole: exciting, drastically change the results, unbelieveable, interesting
- avoid personalities “Dr.Brewer told me..” references to individuals, we,us (except as authors of multi-authored paper) names (except cited or in acknowledgements) team names
- avoid references to fantasy or fiction
- avoid narrative “then, then, then”, dialog, suspense, mystery, surprise, drama,
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