The creature that exhibits the most exotic spikes is a trait that draws a female’s attention. Males compete for females that they wish to mate with by using their spikes and claws to obtain a female’s attention. This species is known to communicate through sound. In particular, they make a call which sounds like a whistle and squeal. They love the social life and prefer to not be solitary and not interacting with others of their kind. These organisms climb trees and make a home within the canopy and tall emergent trees. Their coat color of brown resembles that of tree bark and this trait gives them the ability to camouflage on ground floors as well as life above ground.
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Saying they love the social life is kind of anthropomorphizing the creatures, it would be better to just say they are social creatures.
Rather than saying "Their
Rather than saying "Their coat color of brown...", it would sound better to say "Their brown coat color...".
It would be a lot better to
It would be a lot better to read "A trait that draws a female's attention is determined by the exotic spikes that a creature can exhibit" instead of:
"The creature that exhibits the most exotic spikes is a trait that draws a female’s attention/"