This experiment uses the diversity of insects on different parts of the UMass campus in Amherst, MA to indicate different factors about its microclimates. There has been a great deal of research focused on finding what different insect species says about the area they live. This experiment is designed so different groups can set up traps in various spots so they might be compared and conclusions can be drawn. This project would tell us a great deal about the environment in our area.
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Come First Sentence
I think the first sentence seems a little confusing and could be reworded differently. Maybe use distinct instead of using different three times in the sentence.
so
the word 'so' was used multiple times in a sentence which should be avoided. Also does not sound scientific.