There is one dog that is found on this planet that is versatile in every way not only can it perform jobs for the government and military, but it is capable of being a loving companion and family dog. The German Shepard is one of Americas most popular dog breeds and there is a good reason for it. The German Shepard excels in athletic ability, it can be easily trained, and outside of some inbreeding is an incredibly healthy and resilient breed. German Shepard’s are also known for having medium to large litter sizes with the average being 8 puppies and ranges in litter sizes from 1 to 15 puppies. This large litter size could help the population rise faster than other breeds could. In addition, these puppies are very charismatic, energetic, and intelligent and have big floppy ears until they are a couple of months old making them very adorable. The German Shepard is an incredibly charismatic and loved dog, however, its friendliness and loyalty are equally matched by its usefulness in our police and in our military.
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Very good points to why this breed should be choosen. I don't think you needed to add, "there is a good reason for it" in the second sentence. Overall, some really good points and answers the aims of the assignment.
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There is one dog that is found on this planet that is versatile in every way not only can it perform jobs for the government and military, but it is capable of being a loving companion and family dog. The German Shepard is one of Americas most popular dog breeds and there is a good reason for it. - first sentence is run on and second is very short, try rearranging
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Using the word however in the last sentence makes it seem like you are going to introduce a negative or something counter to what was just said. I would change the word used to connect the parts of the statement.