In “Why Abortion is Immoral”, Marquis argues against the morality of abortion by first explaining why killing other people is wrong. This discussion of why killing people is wrong later segues into his reasoning for why abortion is immoral; Marquis’ “future-like-ours” argument. Marquis explains that killing is wrong because “The loss of one’s life deprives one of all the experiences, activities, projects and enjoyments that otherwise would have constituted one’s future” (189). Marquis later connects the wrongness of killing to the immorality of abortion, suggesting that the standard fetus’ future includes the same experiences, activates etc. of an adult human. Marquis goes further to suggest that because the promise of a future is enough to explain why it is wrong to kill a newborn baby, it follows that it is prima facie wrong to abort a fetus.
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I think you should explain what the quotes means after each one. Maybe elaborate a bit instead of just including the quote and going on to your next idea. Overall, seems like a topic where you could elaborate and debate a lot and where you can express your opinion.
Marquis’ “future-like-ours”
Marquis’ “future-like-ours” argument. - sounds a little awkward after a semi colon, maybe reword
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In the second to last sentence you write "experiences, activates etc." It seems like "activates" is supposed to be "activities". I would also put a comma after activties.