The plant was located by entering the Durfee Conservatory via the West entrance. The plant was the closest in the left row along the aisle. To photograph the whole plant, the photographer stood by the entrance door and aimed his phone camera at the plant. He then walked backwards towards the right of the building until the whole plant could fit in the frame of the picture. The close-up picture of the flower was taken of the closest flower to the door along the aisle side of the plant. The phone was moved close to the flower in order to frame the flower in the image and the photo was taken. To provide a scale, another picture was taken with a “Dunkin Donuts” gift card held above the flower. The name of the plant was taken from a card on the pillar from which the plant was growing.
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This is a very descriptive and detailed method. The use of a card to scale gives the reader a more detailed image. I think your fourth sentence is worded a little weird. So I would recommend changing the structure of the sentence. Maybe say "to achieve the close up picture...."
In scientific writing the
In scientific writing the first person perspective can be used