All of the differences between these two figures have reasons behind them, and most of them are because of an unspecific methods section. For example, when it came to the discrepancies in the labels on the image, it was because the methods did not describe what color or size the letters should be. In addition to that, the methods did not include that there was a white square placed behind the letters in order to distinguish them from the picture. In addition to that, the space between the photos is because the methods didn’t specify how close the pictures should be in the figure. This could have been fixed by including the coordinates and sizes of the images when they were arranged on inkscape in the methods.
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You wrote "In additon to that
You wrote "In additon to that" two sentences in a row, which is a little repeptive. Maybe say Also instead
The first sentence could use
The first sentence could use a little work. Instead of saying "and most of them are because of" you could say "which relate to"