The species of grasses and weeds that inhabit the ground and turf people walk on often go by unnoticed. In this experiment, we propose to study the diversity and richness of these species and figure out what variables play a major role in changing the diversity and richness. In order for the project to be compliant with eight different groups collecting data, we came up with eight different variables. These variables include: soil pH, amounts of sunlight, amounts of foot traffic and nearby vehicular traffic, and elevation in relation to water runoff. In addition to that, other variables groups could study are: frequency the area is mowed, how recently the grass was planted, and the grass’s proximity to a body of water.
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Instead of saying what variables maybe substitute with "figure out the distinct variables that play a minor role in diversity and richness."
The species of grasses and
The species of grasses and weeds that inhabit the ground and turf people walk on often go by unnoticed. - not representitive of subject of paragraph
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maybe being a bit more professional with word choicing such as "figuring out" to "determining "