Part A both figures holds the widest discrepancy between the two figures. Figure 1A shows a flower with a bloom pointed at a 45° angle with respect to the ceiling of the conservatory. Figure 2A depicts a bloom at a 90° angle with respect to the ceiling of the conservatory. Part B of both figures displays a little discrepancy between both figures. Part C both figures varies slightly with respect to the outlining of the states within the United States, and the highlighted portion of florida. Figure 1C displays a map in which the states of the United States are outlined with borderlines, and the state of Florida is highlighted in red. Figure 2C does not contain state borders within the United States, and the state of Florida is colored grey along with the rest of the United States. Additionally, differences in font are noted for the figure labels in each figure.
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Your first sentence is a little confusing and I am not sure what you mean. I would advise changing the wording to the introduction of your results paragraph. You could even delete it and start with sentence two.
Avoid judgment
In the first sentence, avoid using judgemental words such as "widest discrepancy"
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some words are a repeated maybe a bit too much