Polycystic ovary syndrome (PCOS) is a common metabolic and endocrine disorder in premenoausal women. Recent studies have produced evidence that PCOS is a disorder with strong environmental and epigenetic influences, including diet and other lifestyle factors. PCOS frequently appears in assocaition with metabolic disorders, cardiovascular risks, insulin resistance and obesity. This disorder does not require complicated treatments or extensive changes to ones life styles, but have found that the disorder requires appropiate therapies that address hyperandrogenism, a consequence of metabolic disorders.
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In the first sentence you
In the first sentence you left out the p in premenopausal.
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There doesnt seem to be a point or driving force for this paragraph.
There is a missing "p" in
There is a missing "p" in premenopausal!