The organism being observed consists of a body and tail structure covered by a translucent coating. The length of both the tail and body are roughly 15mm and the height of the body is roughly 3mm. The organism is able to move in a wave-like manner, utilizing its ability to contract and expand as well as six leg-like stumps on the bottom of the organism that seem to provide added traction. The six legs counted on the bottom of the organism also seem to provide stabilization and help to turn the organism over when on its back. Also observed through the translucent underside of the organism were white intestine-like organs lining the body, that could have digestive or nervous system functions. Despite being able to move, the organism seemed to lack direction and some sensory skills, moving around the perimeter of the container primarily, and frequently running into the edge. The organism is clearly aware of its surroundings however, when the container was shaken or moved, the organism stopped moving and only resumed when presumed safe. This stopping of movement when in presumed danger could be an important mechanism for evading the detection of predators. Many questions remain about the development of the organism as well as its habitat, place in its ecosystem and sensory and physiological capabilities.
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This is an excellent, concise
This is an excellent, concise description. I like that it concludes with the fact that there are still unknown facts about the organism
need a comma after 'Also' or
need a comma after 'Also' or a clearer subject