Yesterday I read an article titled "Science news: Physicists to probe BEYOND the beginning of time, before CREATION itself" from Express, an online journal from the UK. It discusses that until now, scientists understood the beginning of our universe as a singularity, or a moment beyond what humans and physics could describe. However, modern physicists claim that this is no longer the case. Several state that Einstein's General Relativity "predicts its own downfall due to singularities". Modern physicists believe complicated math and the quantum world can discover the secrets behind phenomena such as black holes and even the creation of the universe. Some of these newly developed formulas are shown in the article. String theory had previously been used to study the absence of singularities, however it had its fallbacks. Essentially, this article claims that singularity does not exist, and that becuase of this black holes and cosmology can be studied for their truths.
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Examples
I think adding some examples would really add to the paragraph, like a specific example of a fallback of the string theory.
Description
Add more description to your paragraph. Your sentences end very abrubtly and do not contain substance to what your paragraph is about
I would be more careful when
I would be more careful when referring to "scientists," "modern physicists," etc. What I think you are referring to is a specific subset of these groups instead of everyone included in the group.
I would be more careful when
I would be more careful when referring to "scientists," "modern physicists," etc. What I think you are referring to is a specific subset of these groups instead of everyone included in the group.