I obtained two photos of the Hibiscus rosa-sinensis Malvaceae, commonly known as the “Snow Queen,” from the Morrill Greenhouses at 12-1 pm (Hibiscus rosa-sinensis). The first photo I obtained was a detailed close up of the flower, while the second photo was a photo that included detail of the plant as a whole. I also created a map that showed the flower originated in East Asia (Hibiscus rosa-sinensis - L). I created one multi paneled figure with the two photos and the map I created. I then gave my methods to a classmate to obtain similar photos that I had taken, and for them to create their own multi paneled figure by following what I had did. The results showed that the figure produced by my classmate was different than the figure I had produced. The panel produced by my classmate was structured different as Figure 2A was the close up photo and Figure 2B was the full plant, while Figure 1A was the full plant and Figure 1B was the close up. Figure 2C highlighted two more countries than Figure 1C. The photos in Figure 2 were taken at different angles than Figure 1. Figure 1 had more spaces in between the photos than Figure 2. Factors that lead to the differences between the figures were: different programs to put the separate photos together, photographed a different flower of the same species, and picking the layouts based on the person’s preference.
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This is a very detailed abstract and touches upon the points of what your paper will be addressing. However, im not sure if you should include some of your differences. I would save that for the results section.
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"what i had did" --> "what i had done". Other than that, good flow from start to finish.
Great work. The 5th sentence
Great work. The 5th sentence however may be a run on sentence.