This project includes the process of creating a methods for another person to follow in order to obtain the same results when creating the same figure. The figure has to be of a type of flowering plant. Each figure has to have 3 panels that include an image of the plant itself, a close-up of the flower or flowers of the plant, and a map of the native origins of the plants. The project results in differences between the figures created. The differences include the objects visible in the images and the exposure of the images. These results indicate there are factors that lead to the differences. The factors include the type of camera and the level of specificity in the methods.
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flow of the first sentence
"process of creating a methods for another person"
When I first read this I wasn't sure what you meant by a methods. Is it a methods section for something and if so what is it? This sentence may be a lot more effective if you were to be more specific on what the methods section is on or what the methods are trying to convey.
Specificity in first sentence
The first sentence of your abstract includes 'this project' but for someone reading the paper, how would they know what project you are refering to?