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Submitted by lgiron on Fri, 03/30/2018 - 12:23

The physical characteristics of males and females are similar but have one distinct differences. Males and females both have an adult length of 12 inches from the tip of the rostrum to the tip of their tail, their tail only being 2 inches long and their thin, elongated rostrum reaching up to 3 inches. Relative to their length, their width is small, reaching only 2 inches across. They both have a light brown colored short hair which extends throughout their main body and head leaving the tail bare, except for a little patch of white hair which they have at the very tip of their tail that they used when hunting. However, in addition to their hair, females have a single white stripe going from neck to the base of their tail, the one only distinct visible difference. Its ears and eyes are large and contain membranes which they are able to control to prevent the sand from entering their ears and eyes. This mammal is also insectivores with small dagger like teeth and have diphyodont dentition. Being an insectivore, they have a small intestine with no cectum. The American Rhingon also have long legs with didactylous toes which have relatively long claws to be able to burrow during the day time while retaining the ability to efficiently grab prey. For this reason, locomotion is ambulatory with a plantigrade foot positioning as their main source of locomotion.



Be sure to proofread. For example it should say " on disitinct difference", there are other small errors with spelling and punctuatiion, but overall good job.

in the sentence "This mammal is also insectivores with small dagger like teeth and have diphyodont dentition." the word insectivores is used incorrectly here instead you should use the word insectivorous. Or change the beginning of the sentence to "this mammal is an insectivore" so that it flows better. Later in the sentence you use "and have diphyodont dentition" have is used with a plural subject, however, the subject "the mammal", in this case, is singular and you should replace "have" with "has".

The second sentence should be broken up into two sentences. It is too run on. 

"plantigrade foot positioning as..." should say "plantigrade foot position as..."