Many young stars have an abundance of energy and often disperse matter throughout space. The sun which is also star, approximately 4.6 billion years ago, was suspected to disperse matter throughout space. However, there was no hard evidence to prove such until recently. New data focused on a set of ancient blue crystals (hibonite) which suggested that the sun emitted a high flux of cosmic rays in its early history. This flux was a lot higher than scientists and researchers expected. This discovery may provide insight into the roles of star evolution in the creation of elements and materials that eventually assemble into planets.
Patel, N. V. (2018, July 31). Ancient space crystals may prove the sun threw heated tantrums as a tot. Retrieved from https://www.popsci.com/space-crystal-meteorite-early-sun#page-3
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The second sentence is missing an "a" after also and before star. In the fourth sentence, you can get rid of "which", the sentence will then be "New data focused on a set of ancient blue crystals (hibonite) suggested that the sun emitted a high flux of cosmic rays in its early history".
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"The sun which is also star, approximately 4.6 billion years ago, was suspected to disperse matter throughout space." I think that there should be a comma after "The sun" and "a" before star.
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"The sun which is also star, approximately 4.6 billion years ago, was suspected to disperse matter throughout space." could be rewritten to "The Sun, which is also a star, was suspected to have disperse matter throughout space approximately 4.6 billion years ago."