Jaguars are an endangered species whose populations began to fall in the mid 1900s due to excessive poaching and hunting. Human development has also decreaed their populations, between building expansions and an increase in agricultural fields. Conservation should give this species top priority because jaguar populations continue to decline and suffer as a direct result of human impact. As a keystone species, jaguars help maintain balance in the food chain as the top predator by controlling populations of subspecies. Ecology can help conserve this species through the protection and conservation of designated habitat patches and corridors so that jaguars may be allowed space which will allow for the ability to survive and grow. Providing protection for the connectivity between different landscapes will allow the jaguars to be able to expand their population gene pool, which will then in turn create a healthier, more stable population. Ecology itself will allow humans to better understand changes in populations, and how more space will allow for increased population growth.
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I would just reread and edit the grammatical errors, like in the second sentence, 'decreased' is spelled incorrectly.
I think you should mention
I think you should mention that the jaguar is a keystone species before talking about how it should be given top priority in conservation, just to give some context to the statement.
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What do you mean by " Ecology can help"