The significance of this study is to show what effect the different burial depths do to germination of the Silybum marianum. The experiment that we are used to base our project on used an entirely different kind of plant from a different region. Also this paper is from 1999 so the data could be outdated. So, by doing this experiment now with a plant from New England we can see if the results are similar to the plants from the great lakes. That way we can compare these plants to see if they react the same to the different depths of germination. We can learn more about the fauna of New England and also learn more about this family of plants. Another important thing would be to find out if the change of the Earth Since 1999 has changed the results of this experiment at all.
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In the second sentence, I would just rid of 'are' as it doesn't grammatically make sense to be there. And, maybe switch up the words used, as you used 'different' twice in that statement.
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You should not make the assumption that the data may be outdated.
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I would rephrase the first sentence so it flows more easily and sounds more formal. In the last sentence, I would change the word "thing" to something more formal, like the word "aspect."