Ultrasounds are frequently used in the medical field to examine a specific region in the body’s inside. A few purposes include diagnosing pain, investigating infections, or examining a baby fetus in a woman's uterus. Furthermore, the procedure to perform an ultrasound is simple and requires minimal preparation, which makes it favorable to practice by nurses and doctors for their patients. In addition, ultrasounds are a safe and painless process that involves a probe and an application of ultrasound gel on the skin’s surface to inspect inside the body. High frequency sound waves are then transmitted through the probe and penetrate through the gel into the body. The machine then collects the sound waves and transforms them to create an image on the screen that can be analyzed. Not only can an image be produced but the transducer can additionally show the image in real-time and capture movement in the body’s internal organs such as blood flow. Lastly, the physical features can be seen such as flexibility of tissues. These analytical features allow ultrasound machines to be efficient for monitoring and diagnosing while simultaneously being safe to operate.
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"Body's inside" should be
"Body's inside" should be written as "inside of the body" It sounds more natural.
In writing avoid using " 's" because that is more verbal language.
Some suggestions:
Some suggestions:
This is a better way to re-word the sentence: "physical features such as flexibility of tissues can be seen"
"is simple" instead of "is a simple"
Small grammatical issues, strong paragraph
The content of the paragraph is very strong and well written! Just some few grammatical issues, specifically run-on sentences tend to be the glaring issue. Try to use commas a little more often to break up the sentence so the reader doesn't feel like "I can't believe I read this in one breath"