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Global Warming Perfect Paragraph

Submitted by rdigregorio on Thu, 02/21/2019 - 12:16

The people who deny global warming often times do not propose solutions. They deny the fact that humans have an impact on global warming, so they do not propose ways for people to correct it. Often, they try to delay or even throw out the bills and laws people pass to try and lessen global warming. This is happening with the current president, President Trump, who is a global warming denier. He thinks that the solutions Obama had passed is waste of money. This will have a profound impact upon the earth. “President Donald Trump's planned climate change policies could lead to an extra half a billion tons of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere by 2025, according to a new analysis.” So, this bill for climate change would just take away from all the solutions of the other side. The solutions for the people who believe in climate change are to have a cleaner planet. Being a more sustainable society and having renewable energy is the best solution. For the people who oppose the idea that humans have a large impact on climate change, all the solutions seem like a waste of money. So, the formation of a solution depends on who is in power.

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-Avoid colloquialisms like "so"

-avoid multiple conjunctions like "and" in the same sentence. This leads to run-on sentences.

Your second sentence makes the first rather redundant. Your opening would be stronger if you connected the two and started with the idea that people who deny climate change do not believe that humans have an impact on global warming, and that they therefore they do not propose any solutions. 

Your paragraph, for the most part, is written consistently in the present tense. I would reword this sentence so it flows better and the tenses match, like this: "He thinks that the solutions Obama passed are a waste of money."