Vitamin D is indicated to be lacking in my diet, for the target of 15 micrograms is not met for I only consume about 3 micrograms on average. Not getting enough vitamin D can be dangerous for it plays the role of modulating cell growth, neuromuscular and immune functions, absorption of calcium, therefore, contributing to bone growth. Deficiency not very uncommon because vitamin D is naturally not present in many foods, making it more important that we are aware of our intakes8. Given that we are entering the colder months it also is more challenging to obtain vitamin D from the sun, therefore it must be done by selecting proper foods. As mentioned before, fat-soluble vitamins are more likely to cause toxicity for it is stored in the body, therefore monitoring the intake of this vitamin is extremely important. In most extreme cases toxicity may raise blood levels of calcium, in turn leading to damage to the heart, blood vessels and kidneys8. Some of the best sources of Vitamin D are fatty fish, including salmon and tuna, both of which are foods I enjoy and will add to my diet in greater amounts to make up for the lack of Vitamin D in my diet. Beef liver, cheese, and egg yolks also contain some amounts of vitamin D.
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Interesting Paragraph
This was a really interesting read because I do not know too much about vitamin. I liked the structure of the paragraph, but I would maybe consider adding an introductory sentence and a more concrete conclusion sentence. Other than that, this paragraph was well written and informative.
Hi! Good paragraph. One thing
Hi! Good paragraph. One thing I noticed was that you used words like therefore a lot. In this sentence "Deficiency not very uncommon because vitamin D is naturally not present in many foods, making it more important that we are aware of our intakes" I think it could be improved by adding somthing between deficiency and not, for example "deficiency is not very" or just stating "deficiency in vitamin D is common because... "