The project focused around the photography of a spider web, which is why some of the biggest factors in causing discrepancies were camera settings. Figure 2 included more of the environment than Figure 1, which can be seen by more of French Hall showing. The number of feet was given as to where to take the picture of the environment from, so it is possible that the phone used for Figure 2 had a different focal length. If it was specified to use an iPhone 7 plus, this could have been avoided. In addition, in Figure 1 the bush appears to be darker. This was most likely because the flash was on when the photograph was taken for Figure 2. When the photo for Panel A in Figure 1 was taken the camera was on 1% zoom, in the second figure the web appears closer which suggests that the camera was zoomed in.
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The project specifies that we
The project specifies that we should use less criticism, and just present the discrepancies.
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The abstract could be better formatted to better sum up this project and also less criticism could be used
There could be more of a
There could be more of a distinction between what was observed and then inferences for why there may have been differences. You flow pretty quickly in the same sentence from difference to reasoning when it may serve you better to take more time in explaining the differences you see and then what variables could have caused it.