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Submitted by cdkelly on Fri, 09/28/2018 - 10:44

Since the web I chose was large and relatively flat, I decided to only focus on the right most portion of it. To take the photo, the camera was held about one foot above it and pointed directly downwards; this way the camera was horizontally parallel with the web, with the screen facing upwards. A quarter held between the pointer finger and middle finger of my left hand, was held at the level of the web and positioned so that it would show up at the bottom left corner of the photo, with little finger showing. Flash was turned on. Once a satisfactory photo was taken, I moved back towards the bike rack. I then positioned myself between the windows of the Student Union and the second pillar of the bike rack structure coming from the web location. The camera was pointed directly at the location of the web and the shot was framed so that the air filtration unit was at the center. The second photograph was then captured.

 

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Some of your sentences are long and can be broken up to have a better flow. The sentence that begins "A quarter held..." has a few distinct ideas that could make it a couple of sentences. You could begin by describing that the quarter was used for scale and then describe how it was held in a different sentence. Also, the sentence following that "Flash was turned on" should be expounded on. You could say that "the flash was used" because it was dark or after trying it with and without the flash and you chose the best picture.