For easy replicability, it was important that the camera position was something that anyone could achieve. The web picture was taken from between the break in the bushes. This area was used because it was the closest you could get to the web without disturbing it. To include the whole web and the gift card that was used for scale, the phone was held about 1.5 feet above the web. At 1.5 feet above, the gift card that was placed on the bottom right side of the photograph was easily seen. The phone was placed completely horizontal as the web was also flat against the bush. The photograph includes the whole web, but there is also a little bit of space around the edges where there is no web and only needles from the bushes. When it came to taking the picture of the environment, the camera position was at a 90-degree angle. The position it was taken from was about 4 feet right, and 3 feet backward from the web. From this position, the image was able to include the web, all the corner bushes, some of French Hall, a wooden structure that held saplings, and the Permaculture Garden shed in the background. This angle was chosen because it allowed for a lot of nature in the picture, and not only man-made structures such as buildings.
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watch your tenses
This was a good paragraph and I think the person that will be reconstructing your figure will not have a hard time replicating this image. You just have to watch out for tense changes, like when you said "includes" rather than "included" about halfway into the paragraph.
Sentence
In "When it came to taking the picture of the environment, the camera position was at a 90-degree angle." the important part of the message is the angle of the camera, so the sentence could be rewritten like "The camera was positioned at a 90-degree angle for taking the picture of the environment."