I believe the second biome is similar to the temperate deciduous forest. Which is most likely found between 30º and 50º N. In this area it is also important to note that it is limited to “on the eastern and western edges of Eurasia, and on the eastern edges of North America” (Bowman 65). This is because the further inland you go the more precipitation is lost which will affect the growth of trees. The main factor that led me to believe that it behaves like a temperate deciduous forest are the periods of sub-freezing temperatures. The sub-freezing temperatures occur between the months of December, January, and mid-February. In addition, I also noticed that there were no periods of time where it was insufficient for plant growth which supports the idea of tree growth. The mystery biome is described as having an annual precipitation rate of 1562 mm. If this biome is like the other biomes we have studied, I’d assume it contains trees such as oak trees which are deciduous and lose their leaves. This trait is important for the freezing temperatures. The mystery biome and the temperate deciduous forest are similar in many ways.
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The first two sentences
The first two sentences should be combined to make one, or otherwise restructured so the second sentence has a subject. ie: specify what is found between 30º and 50º N. Good paragraph overall!
Going off the previous comment
I agree that the first and second sentence should be made into one as well. Also, I don't think that the quote was necessary because you could have said that in your own words and just cited the source. But like the previous comment also said, this was a good paragraph.