The dainty spider fits easily into the small plastic container. I am not sure what species of spider it is, but it seems to very clearly be a spider due to several of its physical characteristics. The main characteristics that identifies this as a spider is the fact that it has eight legs, a feature that applies to many arachnids. It rarely stops moving however it does stay motionless on its webbing which it seamlessly builds at the top of the container via its lower abdomen where it ejects a silky substance. The spider sits on the webbing in a stationary manner to most likely assist in its hunting efforts so as not to disturb potential prey. Physically the spider’s legs are a reddish brown color that each has three to four dark brown spots in nearly the exact same order. The spider’s body is a dark brown bordering on black with several speckles on its back that are a white-yellow color. The speckles are very orderly and move down the spiders abdomen in a vertical direction, they have an almost diamond shape. Its two front legs seem to be the longest and most mobile reaching out when the spider is in motion. The spider has two joints on each leg.
Comments
Your paragraph is really well
Your paragraph is really well laid out and transitions smoothly. Try to have a smoother conclusion sentence.
Great paregraph, but try and
Great paragraph, but try and set the tone with a stronger opening sentence that provides more detail.
Ordering of Ideas
Hi! I really like your paragraph and descriptions of the spider. It is very easy for me to visualize exactly what the spider looks like even though I haven't seen it. A suggestion I have for you is to organize your ideas in the paragraph to make it flow better. For example, I think if you put the last few sentences about the legs of the spider next to when you first mention the legs a little earlier would make your paragraph really stand out. Overall, great job!