Losses, as a result of invasive species arise when there are decreases in agricultural yield, loss of biodiversity, and/or increased spending on herbicides and pesticides used to control the invasive population. With greater knowledge on the invader's impact, we could potentially pinpoint the source of greatest loss and manage the associated problems accordingly. This research could perhaps be crucial in protecting our food sources, our local environments, and reducing the uses of herbicides and pesticides.
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Comments
You should rephrase the first sentence. It is hard to follow.
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I do not think you can judge the research so avoid use "could potentially," and "could perhaps."
I think the word 'could' is a
I think the word 'could' is a little overused and I would recommend using a more active voice by saying 'the aim of this research is..." or "the significance of this project lies in..."