Tetrahymena is a genus of free-living ciliates, a freshwater organism that can inhabit lakes, streams, and ponds and can be found almost everywhere and in a variety of climates. Their main food source is bacteria. Tetrahymena feed by the process of phagocytosis, where is the engulfing of other cells or particles. The membrane of a phagocyte surrounds a cell to be engulfed and then pinches off to create a phagosome inside of itself that contains the engulfed material. The resulting phagosome may be merged with lysosomes to form a phagolysosome for the digestion and release of nutrients for use in other metabolic processes (Phagocytosis Process). Phagocytosis can be quantitated by counting the number of vacuoles that form in a defined time period. Tetrahymena were selected in this experiment to study food vacuole appearance. This was done by taking five samples of cells as follows: one immediately when the India ink was added, one at ten minutes, one at twenty minutes, one at thirty minutes, and one at forty minutes. Samples were taken in small test tubes, and inside a mixture of 100 µL sample of the Tetrahymena and India Ink (which was used to be able to visually observe number of vacuoles formed) and 20 µL of dilute glutaraldehyde to fix the cells was added at each interval of time. After all of the samples were taken, they were studied under a microscope at the 10X objective. The number of marked vacuoles formed for ten different Tetrahymena cells were recorded for each of the time intervals, then graphed using a line graph.
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Perhaps you should break up your topic sentence for clarity. Some of your other sentences appear a bit lengthy, so I suggest also breaking those up so it will flow better. I assume 'Phagocytosis Process' is a source you're citing? If not, I personally would not utilize italics as it is mainly used for scientific names and titles of books.
If you are using in-text
If you are using in-text citation, I think you should have a leading sentence to introduce the source you are stating from before paraphrasing it. Also for in-text citation, I do not think you will use italics. Maybe to simplify the paragraph, you could eliminate the method part of your paragraph to make it easier to read.
Use "which" instead of "where
Use "which" instead of "where" in the third sentence. I would also split up the sentence that starts with "samples" into two sentences, it runs on a bit.