When comparing the two figures there were many differences that could be observed not only with the pictures themselves but with the layout of the figure. When comparing the pictures, the first thing that stands out is that both the trees look very different, with the tree in the replica having pine needles and the tree in the original not having any form of greenery or leaves at all. Another difference I noticed was that the tree in the replia didn't include the Ivy branches on the trunk while they were present in the original picture. The pictures also had very different backgrounds, the original had a grass with a small amount of snow in the background while the replica only has snow. The tree in the original also appears much larger than the tree in the replica. All of the photos in the replica also show where the tree is planted in the ground while for the original we only see this portion of the ground in 2 of the photos.
When comparing the structure of the figures, one thing that stands out is the labeling of the pictures which are labeled as Picture A,B,C,D in the original and labeled 1,2,3,4 in the replica. There are also no descriptions for the figure in the replica while the original contains these descriptions below their respective label. The size of the photos is slightly different between the two, with the original having slightly taller pictures when compared to the replica. The arrows between the two figures also shared some differences, with the arrows for the Ivy all pointed to the same picture in the replica while there is one to each picture in the original. The arrows are also slightly thicker in the replica when compared to the original. The labels the arrows pointing from are different with the original having Ivy Branches and tree and the replicate having Ivy and trees. These labels also have a slightly bigger font size than the labels used on the orginal.
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Try and break the paragraph
Try and break the paragraph into different sections that only talks about specific observation.
Photo size
The sentence that reads "The size of the photos is slightly different..." would work better with "are" instead of "is".
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Watch out for redundancy like in the sentence, "The labels the arrows pointing from are different with the original having Ivy Branches and tree and the replicate having Ivy and trees." The labels could simply be the arrows.