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Locomotion in water and air

Submitted by ncarbone on Thu, 04/04/2019 - 20:57

Organisms who are challenged with moving through air or water as a way of locomotion are each posed with substantial mechanical problems. In air, animals must overcome the force of gravity and sustain force to stay aloft. Flying animals do this by generating lift. Lift is the positive net force of air beneath and above their wings. Flying organisms also often use local weather patterns to assist in generating lift. In water animals must move against water which is both dense and viscous. Fish use trunk and tail musculature to propel themselves through the water. Musculature is composed of bands called myomeres. In air, as objects become larger their overall speed tends to increase but their relative speed decreases. Meanwhile in water the smaller the organism the more viscous the environment is to that organism, making it more difficult to move.

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A lot of your sentences were really short, the paragraph would flow better if you combined some of the sentences. 

"Fish use trunk and tail musculature to propel themselves" fix this sentence so it flows better.

I think your paragraph needs some better organization. There are several times where you switch from talking about air animals to water animals, the sentences should be together based on the animal's environments.