If all domestic dogs are being killed at a terrible speed and there is a vaccine that can save one pregnant mother and her puppies the breed of dog that should be saved is Labrador Retrievers. This breed is America’s most popular dog breed, that is due to its lovable energetic nature that makes them stand out amongst other dogs. Labrador dogs are hard working and can be spotted in many different services. They can be seen working at airports helping security, working with the police force, being guide dogs, emotional support dogs, and being faithful companions to families. Labradors are known for having great intelligence and being very friendly. The breed is highly energetic but at the same time obedient and well trained. This would be the ideal dog to save, one that can provide different services for the benefit of others and also be a loyal companion and friend.
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Instead of referring to the breed as "labrador dogs" I would instead say "these retrievers".
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"The breed is highly energetic but at the same time obedient and well trained."
I think it sounds strange to say a whole dog breed is well trained; maybe instead say they are easily trained.
Include sources and scientific reasoning
The overall message is there, but the content and evidence supporting it is not very strong imo. There are no sources that support your claim, and overall there is no scientific reasoning as to why they should be saved (do they live longer than other dogs to promote more breeding, do they breed often, are they prone to common genetic dog diseases?). These are questions that I asked while reading, yet did not have answered in your paragraph.
There is feeling and why I would like them to be saved, but there is not as much factual reasoning as to why that should be the case