Genome editing (or gene editing) is a type of genetic engineering that involves modifying a living organism’s genome. Specific regions of the genome are deliberately targeted and DNA sequences are inserted, deleted, or otherwise modified to change the sequence at that location and alter gene function, either by preventing or enabling expression, or by changing how the gene is expressed (“Genome editing in brief: what, why and how?”, n.d.). Genetic disorders can affect both somatic (body) cells and germline cells (cells involved in reproduction, such as sperm and eggs). While genetic mutations in the DNA of somatic cells only affect the individual and cannot be inherited, changes in the germline DNA are heritable and can affect future offspring (Ormond et al. 2017). Genetic disorders can only be “cured” by targeting them at the genomic level, which these new advances in molecular and genetic technology have made possible. There are, however, concerns about its viability, ethics, and long- and short-term consequences, especially surrounding the topic of germline editing. Both somatic and germline cells can be edited, and while any changes made to the DNA of an individual's somatic cells will only affect that individual, changes made to their germline DNA could be inherited by their future children. The technology at present cannot guarantee that “unintended modifications created through an editing procedure would not result in a devastating long-term outcome such as cancer or adverse developmental effects if one were to modify a zygote” (Kohn, Porteus & Scharenberg, 2016), which has lead to mixed scientific and public opinions about its use.
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Sight grammatical issue
Grammtical issue: you have a sentence where the flow is cut off too quickly with a comma (minor detail); the bolded one should be removed
"alter gene function, either by preventing or enabling expression, or by changing how the gene is expressed"
otherwise content of paragaph is good; I don't really have anything to add as it's a really solid paragraph
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Perhaps you can break up some sentences to make your ideas easier to understand, instead of presenting one large idea all at once. For example, this is a bit long, "Specific regions of the genome are deliberately targeted and DNA sequences are inserted, deleted, or otherwise modified to change the sequence at that location and alter gene function, either by preventing or enabling expression, or by changing how the gene is expressed (“Genome editing in brief: what, why and how?”, n.d.). "