The significance of completing this research is that it will help us to understand more about the variables that affect the thickness of spider webs. Spider webs are a material of interest to people because they are remarkably strong and able to withstand large forces, yet also soft. They vary widely in strength, some have even been said to be able to withstand hurricane force winds. They have a very high elasticity. Discovering the various factors that contribute to differences in spider web characteristics, such as thickness, could help us learn more about the factors that contribute to their extreme elasticity and could be useful for Material engineering of a material that is both strong and soft.
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This paragraph is somewhat short, but otherwise well written. The use of the word soft is kind of awkward though and another word could be used.
I would expand upon the
I would expand upon the sentence which states that the spider webs have a very high elasticity. It is a good point but the statement itself is short. Why is it important? Is that what makes them able to withstand strong winds?
"Spider webs are a material
"Spider webs are a material of interest to people because they are remarkably strong and able to withstand large forces, yet also soft." I'm not sure if soft is the best word choice for this, maybe something like pliable instead?