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Submitted by curbano on Tue, 10/02/2018 - 17:52

I entered Morrill 4 south and went up the flights of stairs to the second level. I walked into the hallway and turned to the right, where I saw doors that led to the bridge that connects Morrill 4 to Morrill 2. If you look out at the bridge, on the left there should be a blue sign that has “Morrill 4 South” written on it. Underneath this sign is a blue radiator, where I found the spider web. If you stand facing the Morrill 4 sign and the blue radiator, the spider web is located on the bottom left side of the radiator attached to the pipe and black part of the wall. I placed a ticonderoga pencil on the ground, angled at roughly 15 degrees from the wall. I then held my iPhone, with the bottom of it resting on the ground, about 6 inches from the wall and faced it towards the spider web. I then took a photo of the spider web and the pencil with my flash on. To get a photo of the environment, I stood about 5 feet away from the blue radiator, closer to the stairwell than the doors to the Morrill bridge. I then angled my phone so I captured the blue radiator, most of the rug on the floor, the blue Morrill sign, and the left door that goes out to the Morrill bridge.

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sbrownstein

Thu, 10/04/2018 - 12:45

This paragraph is very descriptive and gives a great explaination as to the location of the web. The only suggestion I can make is to make your senetneces a little less choppy. They need more transitions in order to flow better for the reader. In addition, I suggest using roman numerals for the Morrill building number.

msalvucci

Wed, 10/10/2018 - 20:53

This a good paragraph with a lot of great detail. However, I would suggest changing this sentence: "I then angled my phone so I captured the blue radiator, most of the rug on the floor, the blue Morrill sign,". I think they saying "most of the rug" is little bit too vague. You should try to be more specific; maybe you could say, "a foot of the left side of the rug, etc" so that whoever is replicating your methods has a better idea of what to take a picture of.

angelasalaza

Sat, 10/13/2018 - 14:55

This paragraph was well written and accurate but avoid using "I" it makes your sentences less secure. Avoid terms that are vague as well such as "if" "If you stand facing the Morrill 4 sign and the blue radiator, the spider web is located on the bottom left side of the radiator attached to the pipe and black part of the wall." like "if" sounds like a term that makes states if I stand there I might get the same results but what if I don't and I still manage to get the same results, the sentence is not aggressive with proving the point of procedure.