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Spider Observations - Perfect Paragraph

Submitted by sbrownstein on Fri, 09/07/2018 - 15:24

The spider was relatively large compared to the others. I had a dark mustard color with black colorations on it's leg joints. Although the spider may have been large, the body of the spider was the size of a sunflower seed. The underbelly of the spider was transparent and displayed a white spot on it's rear. It's legs extended about an inch beyond it's body. The two front legs of the spider stretched further than the other six. There were small hair follicles that covered all of it's legs. The spider obtained two small balck dots for eyes, in which could not be observed anymore without a microscope. The spider wandered aimlessly in the container in search for an escape. Yet, the spider's movements were rapid. There wereno visible signs of web secretions made within the container. Yet, there was a carcus of the spider's previous meal.



Just make sure to proofread and check your grammar. You use "it's" instead of "its" when talking about the spider. 

I know that we had a limited amount of time but the only thing I noticed were a couple of spelling and spacing errors. Keep an eye out for those, otherwise great job.