As all spiders do, the specimen presented to me had eight legs around its body. However, this particular spider's front two legs were longer than the remaining six. From observing its mannerisms, I believe the spider used these legs as "feelers" in order to guide it around its environment. Furthermore, each leg had three distinct joints which are able to bend at or near 90 degree angles. In terms of coloration, the legs were mostly black with grey spots on its joints. Given that the legs were almost as thin as hairs, it was hard to distinguish the true color of each of them. With that being said, the spider was unique in the sense that its legs were different sizes, used for different purposes, and seem to have had specific markings at different locations on the leg.
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I feel as if the phrase "With
I feel as if the phrase "With that being said" should be avoided.
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I like how you used an observation of the spiders legs to infer that they are used as "feelers". This really shows your though process and what went through you rmind as you looked at the specimen. This paragraph is very concise and 'to the point' which is great! Nice job.
Excellent job structure wise.
Excellent job structure wise. I also thought your observations were very detailed and well organized.