The finer details of Figure Two were analyzed for differences. To start, there is a red UMOC sticker on the UCard in figure two that is not in Figure One. The labels of the images are different as well. The size of the circle in which the letters are placed is much larger than those in Figure One as well as the size of the lettering being larger. The images in Figure Two are labeled differently than those in Figure One. I noticed that the labels for picture of the environment and the map are reversed in Figure Two when compared to Figure One. Figure two also captures more of the surrounding environment including railings, more of the windows, a light post bulb, and the windows behind the air duct are closed whereas they are open in Figure One. Another difference was the red box used to highlight the location of the web within the environment. The box used for Figure Two has different dimensions thus making it more boxy and larger than that in Figure One. The map in Figure Two is also different in that it is more zoomed in than the map of Figure One. The dot specifying the location of the web is also in a different location. It appears to be more towards the front of the building where as my dot was more towards the middle.
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Elaborate
Elaborate on the dfferent labels between the images- what does each say/ where does it differ?
No need to re-emphasize lettering being larger when it's already stated in the beginning of the sentence. "The size of the circle....as well as the lettering" should be sufficient.
Hi! In your paragraph I
Hi! In your paragraph I noticed in your sentence "To start, there is a red UMOC sticker on the UCard in figure two that is not in Figure One", you forgot to capitalize the F in Figure 2.
I noticed that in the
I noticed that in the sentence "Figure two also captures more of the surrounding environment including railings" you decided to not capitalize two. My only suggestion for imporvement would be to capitzalize two as you capitizlie it throughout the rest of the paragraph.