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Submitted by kruzzoli on Wed, 09/26/2018 - 19:35

At 9:50 in the morning I entered Morrill 2 from the front of the building, the side facing the library. I went up one flight of stairs, walked to the back stairwell and left through the two sets of double doors that lead outside, I was now facing Frank dining hall. I turned to face Morrill and at 9:55 in the morning, I took a picture of the spider web in the bottom left corner of the glass pane that was next to the door. I squatted like a duck and held the back of my ucard vertically up to the web so that the Ucard logo was at the top of the card.  I held my ucard vertically so that the back was facing me and the Ucard logo was at the top. At this time there was a little spider about the size of the “A” in “UCARD”. In the image, the ucard is to the left of the spider web and the ucard was held up so it was touching the metal corner of the window frame. The black rubber edging of the glass is about centered in the picture. I then stood up and stood on the curb where the sidewalk ends that is directly across from the doors and took a picture of Morrill that shows the entire doorway and part of the building.

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This methods paragraph is very concise and well written. The only suggestion I have is to give the paragraph some more interesting vocabulary to interest the reader. It \may bore the reader by plainly reciting every activity that was done to collect your pictures for your spiderweb.

The word Ucard is spelled in different ways throughout the paragraph, which could confuse a reader that is not familiar with the term. As well, the expression "squatted like a duck" could be simplified to just "squatted" so that the sentence follows the style of the rest of the paragraph.