Saving the Labrador Retriever is the most logical decision. The Labrador Retriever is the breed with the largest litters. By saving a pregnant lab mother, there is a better probability of getting a large number of young. With a greater number of young, there is a larger chance of getting both male and female puppies. In addition, when the next generation is then born they will also likely have large litters leading to expanding the population more rapidly.
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The sentences seem kind of
The sentences seem kind of choppy and don't flow. Try to add transitions and add more information to your paragraph to support your argument.
Why is your argument important
You say that it is important to have large litters but not why. You may want to consider adding something about genetic variability helping in the long run to support the population.