Animals have evolved multiple strategies for blending in with their environments, from the iconic color-changing common chameleon (Chamaeleo chamaeleon), to resembling a bundle of floating seaweed like the leafy seadragon (Phycodurus eques). These strategies are englobed in a broader term known as crypsis, and play an important role in predator-prey interactions for both hiding and hunting. One example of crypsis as a predation strategy is the case of the flower crab spider Misumena vatia. This species is capable of hunting relatively large prey such as bees, with the help of its ability to change color between yellow and white.
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Very interesting paragraph, I
Very interesting paragraph, I enjoyed the read. The only usggestion I can make is to flip around the struture of the first sentence. By putting the examples first, it will grab the readers attention more.
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The only thing I can suggest is that in your second sentence ("...term known as crypsis, and...") you many not need that comma where you are using the conjugation "and" to continue the sentence.
My only suggestion might be
My only suggestion might be to provide a specific definition for crypsis.