The Namib Desert beetle from southwestern Africa harvests its water from fog. The beetle lets drops of fog accumulate on his body and drip down his wing case into his mouth. There are a few factors needed for the beetle to be able to catch these droplets on their body. If the surface of the body was lubricated, water droplets were less likely to stick. Texture of the body surface also plays a role in catching these droplets. With this knowledge researchers are trying to figure out ways to refill empty bottles with water from the air, just like these beetles do. First, researchers have to manipulate the properties the beetle has to be able to do this. With these materials, this would be how researchers would be able to design a water collection device that could catch water from the wind.
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"Fog" wording accuracy
In te second sentence, maybe clarify that drops of condensed water from the fog are what accumulates, not fog itself. I don't know if it is possible that fog can accumulate in a liquid form.
Personification
Instead of referring to the body of the beetle as 'his body' use its body.
Materials
When you say "With these materials..." in the last sentence, it is a little unclear which materials they are using. Maybe methods would be a better choice of word to refer to the methods the beetle uses to catch water.