The flu shot is often something that is not a priority. The flu shot changes every year to keep up with the varying proteins on the virus. The vaccine is important for the recipient's protection against the flu, as well as everyone surrounding them. Certain individuals are vulnerable to disease, they are the elderly, infants, those recieving chemo-therapy, and individuals with an autoimmune disease. Individuals who are immunocompromised cannot get vaccines, vaccines should be administed several weeks before the individual becomes immunocompromised (if that is possible, such as several weeks before chemo-therapy). These immunocompromised individuals can be protected through herd immunity; when the majority of a population is vaccinated, the virus has a hard time infecting individuals. Therefore everyone should keep up with their flu vaccines to prevent contraction of the virus for themselves, as well as immunocompromised individuals who cannot recieve the vaccine and rely on others for protection.
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First Sentence
The first sentence is somewhat subjective. Can you change that senence to maybe a reference to how many people get the flu shot vs. those who dont? Maybe pull a real statistic from a census?
Semi-colon
"Individuals who are immunocompromised cannot get vaccines, vaccines should be administed several weeks before the individual becomes immunocompromised (if that is possible, such as several weeks before chemo-therapy)." There should be a semi-colon (or a period) instead of the comma.
Comma
"Therefore everyone should keep up" should be "Therefore, everyone should keep up"