The Methods project provides evidence of phytophagy on the University of Massachusetts campus. Students on campus are found organizing in Harvest, one of the markets on campus. In this market, students collect different types of plants into plastic or recyclable boxes. These plants vary by day but typically spinach, kale and romaine lettuce leaves can be observed in this market. At certain times of the day, students will enter Harvest and collect large amounts of leaves for consumption. Factors that are controlled in this project; of time of day, type of market, area of market, area of consumption and vocal consent.
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Maybe the last sentence should be "The factors that are controlled" rather than "Factors"
Introduction purpose
The Methods project's purpose isn't to expose examples of phytophagy at UMass but to study experimental reproducibility and the reasons behind the differences that occurred between the original and replicate figures.
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I believe that a colon rather than a semicolon should be used in the last sentence because the last clause is not independent and is an incomplete sentence.